Reduce Plastic Waste Scheme.
Dear Customers and Suppliers.
We have come up with a new scheme to help look after the environment and reduce the amount of plastic waste we have been using plastic in our packaging. We want to stop putting plastic into our landfills; biodegradable/degradable plastic bags and bottles only break down in specific conditions - which isn't a long term solution. We invite customers to be part of the new scheme. Working together with customers as a community. Feedback on improvements for our new scheme are more than welcome, we aim to change the way customers buy everyday products.
Some of the changes for our new scheme will be down below.
1) All plastics bags will now be replaced with hessian bags (made from flax and hemp fires). First bag is free with order over $50, or we will provide recycled cardboard boxes (along with assistants to the car).
2) Most liquid products (liquid soaps, shampoo, dish washing liquid, etc) now available in ‘fill your own’ containers. Bring your own container to fill and get a 5% discount.
3) Fresh vegetables - instead of plastic bags, try reusable waxed cotton bags to keep food fresh.
We thank you for your ongoing support to our company.
Regards,
Barry and Judith Sampson
Store Owners
123 Green Road 07 444 4444
Newton stanleyorganicsltd@email.com
This is great Isaac!
ReplyDeleteHave a look at this text here: "We want to stop putting plastic into our landfills ; biodegradable/degradable plastic bags and bottles only break down in specific conditions-not a long term solution; we invite customers to be part of the new scheme. Working together with customers as a community; feedback on improvements for our new scheme are welcome, we aim to change the way customers buy everyday products."
Does this make sense if a customer were to read it, not knowing any background about the new recycling scheme?
Is the language formal?
You may need to re-write some of your sentences here. Remember those videos we watched about fragments, run-ons and comma splices.
Everything else looks great! Ka pai :)