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Friday, 14 August 2020

Instructions

 


From Meg Smith 

To : All Staff Members

CC: Manager

Date: 11 August 2020

Subject: Fire evacuation procedure.

Hey guys i just wanted to let you know we have to all know the proper procedure for a fire emergency these instructions had to be sent to all staff members please read all of the following instructions below.


  1. When the fire alarm sounds, staff are supposed to leave the building immediately and assemble at the main car park.


  1. Staff must not leave the car park (or return to the building) until the Fire Safety officer 

gives them the all clear.


Finally, the last thing I wanted to talk about was that some of the staff complained that the emergency exits were blocked by boxes of stock, chairs, and a table! This is illegal and unsafe, and staff need to keep the emergency exits clear at all times. If you any more questions regarding this information contact me at my email Megsmith@workplace.co.nz


Kind Regards,

Meg Smith

Administrator
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  1. Anonymous14 August 2020 at 11:53

    Hey Isaac,
    Great work on this.
    -I would start with a more formal greeting, and skip a line after.
    -Can you tab your concluding paragraph over so that it aligns with the first one?
    -Watch for lowercase 'i' -- this should be capitalised always.
    -Exclamation points are kind of "shouty" -- do we want to convey an aggressive tone in a work email?
    -Check your sentences in your first paragraph. Refer back to grammar videos we watched.

    Everything else looks great! :) ka rawe

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